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I remember your face.
Those bright, kind eyes
That dazzling white smile.

I remember how cute you looked,
When someone told a lame joke
And you'd struggle not to laugh.

I remember your pout,
The way you'd look at me and beg
And I could never say no.

I remember your blush,
That deep, scarlet red
When I teased you about how you snored.

I remember your warmth,
When we would cuddle up at night
And how your breath would hitch as my fingers trail along your spine.

I remember your expression,
When I burst into the hospital room
That tiny smile which said, "Don't worry."

And I remember you.
When I saw you for the last time
Your eyes, that would never open again.
Your mouth, that would never smile again.
Your voice, that would never whisper in my ears again.
Your hands, that would never hold mine again.
Your lips, that would never kiss me again.
Your love, that would never die.

I will never stop hurting
Because I will never forget.
You will always be in my life, for better or worse.

There will always be an empty chair.
I didn't intend to write the person dead at first... I intended to just write them leaving or something... the death part just sort of came out...

Now I've made myself sad. :(

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Sammylovesyoulots Featured By Owner Oct 24, 2013  Student Writer
I started smiling. Then realiztion hit me like a bag of bricks. So then I was all frowning.
Still an amazing poem that drew out my emotions.
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SomeLameStuff Featured By Owner Oct 24, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Success! What I was going for! =P

Thanks for reading!
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Sammylovesyoulots Featured By Owner Oct 24, 2013  Student Writer
No problem :D
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wallpop09 Featured By Owner Oct 24, 2013
I like it. It is sad though
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SomeLameStuff Featured By Owner Oct 24, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Thanks! =)
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V1ckward Featured By Owner Oct 24, 2013  Student General Artist
THE FEELS! I'M DYING :'( This is a brilliant poem, I'm not an expert but it made me sad
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SomeLameStuff Featured By Owner Oct 24, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
I gave myself feels when writing it too. >.<
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V1ckward Featured By Owner Oct 24, 2013  Student General Artist
I do that -.- just sitting there dying because the story's getting to me xD
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SomeLameStuff Featured By Owner Oct 24, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
*type type type* Oh god, I'm crying now... XD
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V1ckward Featured By Owner Oct 24, 2013  Student General Artist
XD That is me!!
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