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I wish
One day, the past will leave me be.
Crawl back into the shadows
Release its hold on me.

I wish
One day, I can hold my head up high.
Ignoring the cruel remarks
That make me want to curl up and cry.

I wish
One day, the pain will fade.
The constant ache in both heart and body
So I won't always be afraid.

I wish
One day, everybody can get along.
Mom and Dad won't fight anymore
And everyone can feel like they belong.

I wish
One day, I won't want to die.
But there's so much suffering
Why should I even try?

But most of all
I wish for a friend
Someone who is caring.
Someone who is loyal.
Someone who is kind.

I wish
One day, I will have a friend.
Someone whom I can trust
Someone who won't pretend.
I may have promised myself a week off from writing after Camp NaNoWriMo ended, but poems don't count since it's not related to my novel! Right?

Okay fine, I'm just bad at keeping my promises. Especially to myself.

Also, BONUS line to anyone who's actually reading this part. This idea for the last line came up when I was writing it. Made me laugh. Tack it on if you want =P :

"I wish I had a dog."
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Silencedbook9 Featured By Owner Aug 6, 2013  Student Writer
I understand.
Do you need a hug? 
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wolfie-girl96 Featured By Owner Aug 5, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
"I wish I had a dog"

Best way to start the thinking process! Used to wish that when I was younger... now I have a dog and I like my puppy kitty more. o3o
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LotusXDragon Featured By Owner Aug 5, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Great poem :)
Where did the line come up? Giggle 
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straight-butch29 Featured By Owner Aug 5, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
This is written in the same tone I used to write one of my poems. This one, I mean----> straight-butch29.deviantart.co… feel free to add a comment on it please ^^
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lonelynightrain Featured By Owner Aug 5, 2013  Hobbyist Writer

The poem itself is dark, brooding, yet it still holds some light tones in it too.

 

Wonderful job.

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SomeLameStuff Featured By Owner Aug 5, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Thanks! =D
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lonelynightrain Featured By Owner Aug 5, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
You're very welcome!
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QueenOfLostThings Featured By Owner Aug 4, 2013

Lovely and deep. Kind of dark, but still pretty.

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