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Please
Will you talk to me,
And let me know I'm not invisible?

Please
Will you hold my hand
And let me know I have a friend?

Please
Will you hold me close
And let me know I'm wanted?

Please
Will you kiss me
And let me know I'm loved?

Please
Will you do these things
And let me feel alive?
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Themoonofmyheart Aug 18, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
you will come alive with your dreams and feelings :) I love your style of repeated questioning, that only assures more that you are alive because when reasoning starts the heart even beats faster :heart: just replace "you" with "I" and you will be all great :hug:
Qita
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Bananling Aug 18, 2013  Student Digital Artist

If anything else it is a bit comforting to see other people having these feelings.
Traditional style, simple not really elegant but it doesn't have to be to me it feels more about the message - pretty good!

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Lizardhound Aug 18, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Yes.
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Lizardhound Aug 18, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Most of hem, anyways.
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:iconkillerlord123:
I'm still looking for a person who makes me feel alive as well.
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Silencedbook9 Aug 13, 2013  Student Writer
Hello!
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SomeLameStuff Aug 13, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Hello!
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Silencedbook9 Aug 15, 2013  Student Writer
How are you? 
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SomeLameStuff Aug 16, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
I'm fine!
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Silencedbook9 Aug 18, 2013  Student Writer
Okay but call me when you need a hug? :)
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